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Post by Ambrogio Genio on Mar 14, 2018 1:01:41 GMT
FINGERS BLUE M U S I C
Namesake: Fingers Blue by SmokepurppPower Type: Phenomenon Stand Appearance: A cold blue aura that lingers around the tip of the user's fingertips when the Stand is summoned. Theme: Oxygen, Hydrogen, and Water Description: The Stand, Fingers Blue, is an aura that is summoned on the fingertips of the user, allowing the user to control the elements of oxygen and hydrogen. The Stand is also capable of summoning water and controlling it.
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Post by Romero on Mar 14, 2018 4:59:45 GMT
The Oxygen stuff is fine, but the Air theme and description are too broad; temperature control, moisture control, "air-related techniques and such" - that's all too much for one theme. Try to narrow down what the Air theme is capable of such as what you did with the Oxygen theme, but don't stray far from one theme or another.
As an example; your Oxygen theme controls Oxygen levels, but then the Air theme controls moisture levels which is basically water manipulation which almost has nothing to do with Oxygen. If you were to instead focus on Hydrogen as a theme in which you control Hydrogen levels (plus Oxygen Levels), then you have the full power of H2O. But this is just a suggestion - don't take my advice as the ultimate answer.
Long story short - the Air theme is too broad.
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Post by Ambrogio Genio on Mar 14, 2018 6:30:59 GMT
Giving it a good think, I feel it may be best to go the Hydrogen route. Fixed.
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Post by Romero on Mar 14, 2018 8:38:38 GMT
Approved~
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Post by Romero on Mar 18, 2018 3:37:59 GMT
Phenomenon Stands have been updated, so add one more theme clearly related to the other themes and update the description accordingly~
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Post by Ambrogio Genio on Mar 18, 2018 7:57:56 GMT
Added new theme as Phenomenon was updated.
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Post by Romero on Mar 18, 2018 8:36:52 GMT
Approved.
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Post by Romero on Mar 21, 2018 2:50:28 GMT
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