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Post by Guldemond on Mar 24, 2018 2:11:12 GMT
(credit to Romero for the art) Polynesia Namesake: Song by Mother Mother Power Type: Stand: Long Range, Sentient Appearance: Polynesia’s top half is humanoid. It has a plain white surface, with colourful rings across its body.It has two tentacles where arms would be and six more in place of legs. Its head has fins that resemble hair and in the centre of its face is a black circle that slightly resembles an eye. The whole stand stands at 1.3 meters. Theme: Phantoms Description: Polynesia is able turn any solid object or willing living creatures it touches into an intangible, semi-transparent form that can only be touched by stands, dynamism, ghosts, etc. Objects and creatures affected by this ability are still influenced by gravity, but are unable to pass through objects by falling, stepping, and/or resting on said objects. As this ability does not affect the air around a creature, use of this ability on them is limited to however long they can hold their breath. Anything affected by this Power passing through another object will be forced to stay spectral until no longer passing through another object. Though it is obedient to its user, the stand behaves more like a domesticated animal than a pure extension of its users’ will. Stats (also only for applicable Stand Types) Strength | Speed | Range | Potential | 2(1) | 2(1 m/s) | 3(30m) | 3 |
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Post by Romero on Mar 24, 2018 17:25:49 GMT
Ok, before anything else is graded about this spectralizing Power; what exactly do you mean by "spectral form"? I need every detail you can give me - assume I know nothing about ghosts.
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Post by Guldemond on Mar 24, 2018 18:26:31 GMT
I've added some detail.
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Post by Romero on Mar 24, 2018 19:19:00 GMT
Good enough explanation.
Though I will have you change and add some stuff;
The last thing I'll have you add;
If you're ok with these changed, then edit appropriately and bump this thread~
P.S. - I think this type of Power work better with a Long Range Stand. Sure the Stand is half as strong and fast, but the distance this Stand is able to travel from the user is much greater and therefore this ability can be used from a greater distance while the user stays hidden. Just some advice, not an edit you have to make.
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Post by Guldemond on Mar 24, 2018 20:16:26 GMT
Changes made
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Post by Romero on Mar 24, 2018 21:10:39 GMT
...sorry, two more things.
Appearance - How large is the Stand? Keep in mind the maximum size of Long Range Stands.
Stats - Since the Stand has 2 Strength with the 50% reduction due to being Long Range, the (0.5) should be (1). I've also decided to change the boost to Range for Long Range Stands to match the canon a little better (and the 50% reduction to strength and speed is pretty heavy). Now the Range is 1,000% (multiply by 10).
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Post by Guldemond on Mar 24, 2018 21:32:50 GMT
No problem, edited.
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Post by Romero on Mar 25, 2018 0:03:02 GMT
Approved.
[div align="center"][img alt="STANDO" style="max-width:100%;" src="https://i.imgur.com/xskgcfq.png"][/div] (credit to Romero for the art)
[div align="center"][font size="4"][b]Polynesia[/b][/font][/div]
[b]Namesake:[/b] [a href="https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=UlyhxPm7gsA"]Song[/a] by Mother Mother
[b]Power Type:[/b] Stand: Long Range, Sentient
[b]Appearance:[/b] Polynesia’s top half is humanoid. It has a plain white surface, with colourful rings across its body.It has two tentacles where arms would be and six more in place of legs. Its head has fins that resemble hair and in the centre of its face is a black circle that slightly resembles an eye. The whole stand stands at 1.3 meters.
[b]Theme:[/b] Phantoms
[b]Description:[/b] Polynesia is able turn any solid object or willing living creatures it touches into an intangible, semi-transparent form that can only be touched by stands, dynamism, ghosts, etc. Objects and creatures affected by this ability are still influenced by gravity, but are unable to pass through objects by falling, stepping, and/or resting on said objects.
As this ability does not affect the air around a creature, use of this ability on them is limited to however long they can hold their breath. Anything affected by this Power passing through another object will be forced to stay spectral until no longer passing through another object.
Though it is obedient to its user, the stand behaves more like a domesticated animal than a pure extension of its users’ will.
[b]Stats[/b]
[div align="center"][table][tbody][tr][td style="border:1px solid #000;padding:3px;"][div align="center"][b]Strength[/b][/div][/td][td style="border:1px solid #000;padding:3px;"][div align="center"][b]Speed[/b][/div][/td][td style="border:1px solid #000;padding:3px;"][div align="center"][b]Range[/b][/div][/td][/tr][tr][td style="border:1px solid #000;padding:3px;"][div align="center"]2(1)[/div][/td][td style="border:1px solid #000;padding:3px;"][div align="center"]1(0.5)[/div][/td][td style="border:1px solid #000;padding:3px;"][div align="center"]3(30m)[/div][/td][/tr][/tbody][/table][/div]
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